Roy00's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

["The Lottery"]

hm

i feel like there is alot of missing parts to this song. in the first half, you need more supporting melodies. the whole song doesnt seem to have any sort of exact feeling because of missing parts.

[He's Ok]

hm.

ok. it was good from the start. i think one thing you could have done is keep the beginning piano part and just played it through so you could have had a build with several background melodies. you have ideas in your head. just try to organize them more.

[Movement in C Minor]

it was good but...

you need to add alot more obviously. the song is too short. a movement last quit a while longer then that.

[you know this song ...tru]

well that was weird

yeah, i wouldnt know that song if you sang it anymore off key. i BARELY recognized it.

[joyous waltz (incomplete)]

...interesting....

i dont know about the SINGING at the end, but all together i think you need to add more instruments. it sounds very empty. personally i dont like the quality of sound your using but i try to look pass that. also a final recommendation... leave the singing out...

triangleshower responds:

but i'm just such a beautiful singer...
*silent sobbing*
also, i've given up on finishing the song.

[<Righteous Intent - CH3>]

hm

sounds like you have great ideas in your head! the thing is, i think, you need to organize your thoughts a little more. there are alot of off notes not in the chord. your percussion is great! your notes kinda flutter everywhere, except towards the end. the end was good.

ExpectExpansion responds:

Thanks for the review, I struggled with the muddy sound of the song for awhile, the problem being multiple counter melodies going on at once ( 4 total at one point). What I had thought to do is split up the song and play through every melody but the song would be like 7 min that way haha =p.

[Church1a]

soft sounding

i like the set tone. the thing is that it ends very fast and in a awkward chord. im not sure if you meant that at the end.

[WakeUp]

hey, it was ok.

it was good. i feel like you need to clean up your notes alittle bit on the piano. oh, and i think i'd still label this as drum n bass.

[Through Clouds and Sky]

Very good.

i really liked this one! it has a very bittersweet asian sound indicating a long ago legend or something. i loved it.

[Sandy Planet]

hm...

i loved it. i think maybe like a minute or two into the song, you felt unsure of the chords you were playing so it sounded wrong but, altogether i like it!