Roy00's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Classical/Fantasy Waltz]

REALLY good!

i enjoyed it! it good. i wish it was longer. i think you can do alot more with this mood. elaborate in different modes of the theme! i look forward to hearing what else you got!

shaulhadar responds:

Thank you very much for your pointers, i appreciate it

[A Near Perfect Ending]

good

its not too bad except i think you can do a little more to the song besides repeating it. this is in no way to offend but someone listening can grow bored of the same sound. if you plan on repeating your set theme then think about changing it in different variations. not to bad though. keep it up.

Shigged responds:

Yeah I kind of did go overboard with the repetition on this one, its more of a decorated loop than a song I suppose!

Anyway thank you very much for the review, even though I'm thanking you a few months on!

=]

[Nezumi - Becoming the void]

Good

definitely not bad at all but i wouldnt say it should be on the top. nice chords and the effects that you put in very subtle which gives it a nice overall feeling. keep it coming guy.

nez1536 responds:

Thanks for the good review :) And yeah, I know that it's not perfect.

[A Fulfilled Heart (demo)]

very good.

i like this one best, not saying that all the other ones i dont like. they just all sound the same. but this song sounds most different. i guess cause its in a different scale. this one stricks more feeling to me especially in the middle part. i do feel however that this song might lack some "structure" or a theme. but thats just me cause thats more my style. this song is most unique. keep up the good work.

p.s. sorry about that song with silence. im just too damn lazy to delete it.

Dude09 responds:

lol no problem bout the silent song. i'm partially an impressionist, so the seeminly lack of structure is intentional, (i'm a big fan of debussy, ravel, chopin) thanks a lot for your compliments though :D

[Gothic Lullaby]

better job!

i would have maybe one thing different and that is maybe gone into another chord or something after repeating the melody twice and created a secondary movement. keep it soming buddy.
-Roy00

Gheninae responds:

Thanks man! I definantly want to revamp this song eventually, and i'm definantly gonna give it some variety! Thanks for your support!

[Demonz Wingz]

Good job

not too bad for a first. it might be short but its good for what it is. i would have created more of a melody to go with what you had here. i think this song is more of a background counter-melody without the actual theme in it. i dont know if any of this makes sense.. i hope to here more from you in the future.

-Roy00

Gheninae responds:

Thanks for your support! And yes I understand you completely! I'll definantly keep working hard!

[Adventure.]

hmm..

i dont know what program youre using but try using more intruments as well as holding back some of those dynamics from whatever kind of intrument you're using to play that main melody. also try thinking about the chord you're in before adding alot of notes to the melody. i feel like some of the notes are off. but in any case. its more well put together then A LOT of the junk found on this site. keep it coming.

JollyJasian responds:

Thanks a lot. Yeah I was driving towards more of just a constant low bass line rather than tonality. I will.

[The Yellow Lounge]

interesting ..

frankly, like alot of people, i was expecting something symphonic. it reminds me of a game from nintendo 64. if you heard of it, it reminds me of "bomberman hero". it sounds almost exactly like that style of music and that music is very loungy. i would definitly consider this to go to something like ambient or lounge or something with a soft techno beat. nevertheless, nice job.

vai90 responds:

Thx. I changed the title and the description now. :P

[Unkown Impact]

good job !

good use of electronic percussion. its not a bad loop altogether. my only suggestion is go deeper into the theme you have i guess. i like how it picks up the beat a little more towards the end before it fades into its original classical settings. nice song!

SniperSnake19 responds:

Thanks for the kind words. I wont be changing the composition anymore though. After all that time its time to move on to a new project. I do see your point by the by.

Spine Therapist

[The Precursor Legacy]

im not sure but..

it sounds like you took what was already made and just recorded on it. like you INCLUDED the piano part. the strings and percussion sound just fine but the piano is not even in the same key. the strings and percussion alone would have been ok. if youre going to add that piano part, try and first think of the key the song is in, and try to think about a certain melody you're going to use cause those series of notes dont make musical sense.

CatacombKid responds:

Well that's the thing, I was trying to make it sound weird and out of key, it was totally experimental, thanks for bombing it though, I really appreciate that.