REALLY good!
i enjoyed it! it good. i wish it was longer. i think you can do alot more with this mood. elaborate in different modes of the theme! i look forward to hearing what else you got!
REALLY good!
i enjoyed it! it good. i wish it was longer. i think you can do alot more with this mood. elaborate in different modes of the theme! i look forward to hearing what else you got!
Thank you very much for your pointers, i appreciate it
good
its not too bad except i think you can do a little more to the song besides repeating it. this is in no way to offend but someone listening can grow bored of the same sound. if you plan on repeating your set theme then think about changing it in different variations. not to bad though. keep it up.
Yeah I kind of did go overboard with the repetition on this one, its more of a decorated loop than a song I suppose!
Anyway thank you very much for the review, even though I'm thanking you a few months on!
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Good
definitely not bad at all but i wouldnt say it should be on the top. nice chords and the effects that you put in very subtle which gives it a nice overall feeling. keep it coming guy.
Thanks for the good review :) And yeah, I know that it's not perfect.
very good.
i like this one best, not saying that all the other ones i dont like. they just all sound the same. but this song sounds most different. i guess cause its in a different scale. this one stricks more feeling to me especially in the middle part. i do feel however that this song might lack some "structure" or a theme. but thats just me cause thats more my style. this song is most unique. keep up the good work.
p.s. sorry about that song with silence. im just too damn lazy to delete it.
lol no problem bout the silent song. i'm partially an impressionist, so the seeminly lack of structure is intentional, (i'm a big fan of debussy, ravel, chopin) thanks a lot for your compliments though :D
hmm..
i dont know what program youre using but try using more intruments as well as holding back some of those dynamics from whatever kind of intrument you're using to play that main melody. also try thinking about the chord you're in before adding alot of notes to the melody. i feel like some of the notes are off. but in any case. its more well put together then A LOT of the junk found on this site. keep it coming.
Thanks a lot. Yeah I was driving towards more of just a constant low bass line rather than tonality. I will.
interesting ..
frankly, like alot of people, i was expecting something symphonic. it reminds me of a game from nintendo 64. if you heard of it, it reminds me of "bomberman hero". it sounds almost exactly like that style of music and that music is very loungy. i would definitly consider this to go to something like ambient or lounge or something with a soft techno beat. nevertheless, nice job.
Thx. I changed the title and the description now. :P
good job !
good use of electronic percussion. its not a bad loop altogether. my only suggestion is go deeper into the theme you have i guess. i like how it picks up the beat a little more towards the end before it fades into its original classical settings. nice song!
Thanks for the kind words. I wont be changing the composition anymore though. After all that time its time to move on to a new project. I do see your point by the by.
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im not sure but..
it sounds like you took what was already made and just recorded on it. like you INCLUDED the piano part. the strings and percussion sound just fine but the piano is not even in the same key. the strings and percussion alone would have been ok. if youre going to add that piano part, try and first think of the key the song is in, and try to think about a certain melody you're going to use cause those series of notes dont make musical sense.
Well that's the thing, I was trying to make it sound weird and out of key, it was totally experimental, thanks for bombing it though, I really appreciate that.
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