Roy00's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nezumi - Becoming the void]

Good

definitely not bad at all but i wouldnt say it should be on the top. nice chords and the effects that you put in very subtle which gives it a nice overall feeling. keep it coming guy.

nez1536 responds:

Thanks for the good review :) And yeah, I know that it's not perfect.

[Putting An End To Soundwaves]

Very nice!

i ALWAYS like this mood music! its strikes a heartfelt chord with me. and to think a beginner came up with this??! nice job! keep it coming buddy!

[The Story Untold (Demo)]

Good work

i think your changes in mood are a little limited. the song is a little repetitive and might need a chord change which can be difficult even for me. maybe its the same use of the melody. go more in depth with what you've developed and you'd end up with different tones of the same melody. overall good job! im not a piano person myself so its always nice to hear a piano piece.

[A Fulfilled Heart (demo)]

very good.

i like this one best, not saying that all the other ones i dont like. they just all sound the same. but this song sounds most different. i guess cause its in a different scale. this one stricks more feeling to me especially in the middle part. i do feel however that this song might lack some "structure" or a theme. but thats just me cause thats more my style. this song is most unique. keep up the good work.

p.s. sorry about that song with silence. im just too damn lazy to delete it.

Dude09 responds:

lol no problem bout the silent song. i'm partially an impressionist, so the seeminly lack of structure is intentional, (i'm a big fan of debussy, ravel, chopin) thanks a lot for your compliments though :D

[_-={As I Remember}=-_]

well well..

if it isnt Maestro Rage all grown up! From the hit "Tanks of Thunder" to this now spectacular piece. Well put together if i dont say so myself. You certainly come quit along way in many unique styles. keep it up buddy!

-Roy00

[Condor]

very good!

wonderfully written! its good but i feel like it lacked just a little more complexity for some reason.. i mean it sounds like something real and meaningful in the beginning but then you began playing around with the chord from minor to major. the only problem i guess with this i had is that it didnt quite had the same feel as i had hoped in the beginning. Regardless, great job. i was really good.

-Roy00

[Adventure.]

hmm..

i dont know what program youre using but try using more intruments as well as holding back some of those dynamics from whatever kind of intrument you're using to play that main melody. also try thinking about the chord you're in before adding alot of notes to the melody. i feel like some of the notes are off. but in any case. its more well put together then A LOT of the junk found on this site. keep it coming.

JollyJasian responds:

Thanks a lot. Yeah I was driving towards more of just a constant low bass line rather than tonality. I will.

[Journey Melody]

Nicely put together

overall not a bad job at all! the only thing i feel i might change about this piece is that there is no set melody or anything.. although the beginning is nicely brought back. you might also look into using more parts of the orchestra i guess, unless this is your style then you're fine. good job!