Roy00's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[newtwo]

interesting..

its original i'll give you that. but i think your chords are unsure. try a little basics in chords.

[Oh, Music!]

ok...

my only beef is that i can hear you guys almost getting off key. and if thats not the issue, try to go over what kind of sound your words should sound like. example: maybe the word "word", in the middle where the "o" is, can sound like "ah". i dont know much about choir but i was in it for a small amount of time.

CaptinChu responds:

Oh yah, I was the only one who did that, and I just repeated my voice over and over. It's one of those "Row, Row, Row your boat" deals. But I take that as a complement. I did go off key, but this was one of my earlier pieces. Thank you for your review!

[A Slow Celebration]

hm

you need more complexity and some clarity of which instruments need to be heard more. i think your missing alot of part in this particular piece.

[String Soundtrack]

very nice

nice work with chord changes. but all you seem to do is whole notes with chord changes. you lack alot of theme or complexity.

[Piano Concerto, I]

very nice

i think you have great chords! my only thing i guess is that in the beginning, the piano should have been more quiet while the orchestra came in. I guess more dynamics is all you need!

[Back to the Silent Hill]

ok...

you were in key but the higher pitch notes were off key. i'd say learn to stay in key. then you need some kind of clarity and maybe more background counter themes.

[Haunted College]

good

not bad. i like some of your chords. but i would imagine with this kind of tone, you can only get attention for so long. oh, and work at a ending that fades out more rather then abruptly.

DrRalf responds:

Depends ..
This was meant a little as an non-serious submission ;) Just 10 minutes of piano-roll editing with a Vanguard plugin. The end sucks, the variety does too, the clarity might too etc.. But a 7 is good thanks

[Demon symphony]

ok

so its original. but when you put no noticeable effort, it not original. its nothingness.

[~|Eternal Struggle|~]

good

it sounded good. im not exactly sure but i think you get off the beat in the beginning and whats more is that you slow down the whole thing. good use of instrumentation. just make it longer.

[Mantis' Theme]

very good

i like the switching of the beat in the beginnig to the other instruments. good transition.